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TAO TSZ WING (
6A) Once upon a time, there were a tiger, a dog, a cat and
a monkey lived in a village in China. One day, the tiger ran
after the animals and wanted to eat them. Suddenly, the tiger fell
down into a hole and could not jump out. Luckily, the dog, the cat,
and the monkey found the tiger. They found a rope to pull the tiger
up to the ground. Finally, they became best friends. Then, they
played and lived together. And the tiger did not want to eat them
now. They would share the food and have a walk in the forest
together. Sacred Heart of Mary Catholic
Primary School (Tai Po)
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TAO TSZ WING (
6A) Last week, I had a fever, I felt tired and thristy. I
visited Happy Clinic. Then, Dr.Chan gave the fever pills for me. I
did not want to eat the fever pills, so Dr.Chan gave the fever syrup
for me. Then, Dr.Chan said, "You have to take one teaspoon, four
times a day and you must shake well before use." When should I stop
taking the fever pills?" I said. "You should stop taking the fever
pills when you did not have a fever anymore." Next, we went home.
Then, I took the medicine. Later, I got well. Sacred Heart of Mary Catholic Primary School (Tai
Po)
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TSE CHI WAI (
6A) The year in S.H.M.C.P.S It is my sixth year at
S.H.M.C.P.S. At is a place full of satisfaction. On 20th November,
2007 everybody of my school went to Tai Po sports ground to take
part in the school sports day.
On sports day, because I was
the helper of the day, I went to Tai Po sports ground the first.
When everybody arrived, the opening ceremony was held. It included
flag raising, sing school song and so forth. Right after that, the
competition began. First, it was the running competition. Players
ran very fast, everyone cheered gladly for players. The next event
was the high jump, players jumped very high. I felt they were very
great. For the long jump, players jumped very far. I thought they
were excellent. After that was the softball. Players were very
strong. I thought they would be tired because they paid a lot of
effort. Then was the 4 x 100 Invitation Relay and the Parent and
Children Relay. They were cooperative. I thought they cooperated
well with each other at that time. When the competitions finished,
there was the Artistic Gymnastics Performance. The dance was
beautiful. I thought they must spend a lot of time to practise.
Finally, there was the prize presentation ceremony. We presented a
lot of prizes. I have a lot of precious memories here. I feel
all students are extremely good and accommodating.
Sacred Heart of Mary Catholic Primary School (Tai
Po)
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LAI CHEUK HEI HENRY (
6B) A new ending for Cinderella ......Then, it was
almost midnight. Cinderella ran out of the palace quickly. When
Cinderella went home, she saw her stepmother and stepsisters, they
were angry because they knew the beautiful girl in the palace was
Cinderella, so they did not give food to her. Suddenly, the
fairy with a magic wand appeared again. She made Cinderella to be a
beautiful girl again and said, "Go to find the prince." Then the
fairy made an exit to her and disappeared. After that,
Cinderella went to the palace quickly. When she arrived at the
party, the young man with a mask came and said, "I am the prince,
can you marry me?" Cinderella said, "Yes!" Finally, they got
married and lived happily forever. Sai Kung
Sung Tsun Catholic Primary School
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CHEUNG CHUN HIN (
6E) THE THREE LITTLE ANGELS (1) - THE GREAT ADVENTURE
Once upon a time, it was an Angel World. There were three little
angels. They were Alex, Alan and Alec. One day, Alex said,
"Would you like to go to M78 Nebula?" Alan and Alec answered,"We
heard that there are some great Ultramen and some monsters on it.
Are you scared of them ? " "No!" Then they found their grand
dad, Scott. They asked, "Could you please make a spaceship for us to
go M78 Nebula?" Scott answered, "Yes, but I want to see the great
Ultramen too ! May I go with you?" "Sure!" Soon, Scott made a
super great spaceship, M78sb. Quickly, it took them only three hours
to go to M78 Nebula. Alec said, "Well, it's so fast ! From our home
to M78 Nebula it is about three thousand light years!"
(*Remarks: One light year is about ten million million
kilometres.) When they got to M78 Nebula, they saw many TVs,
NDSs, GBAs, PSPs, PS1s, PS2s, PS3s, PS5s and so on. The three angels
and Scott played and lived in M78 Nebula for two months. After
two months, they said,"I really want to see the real ones."
"Bomb!" their mother, Cindy said, "Hey ! Silly guys." They were
very scared. "Bomb !!!" Grandma came, "Cindy, don't hurt your
litte baby." And then, the great grandma said, "Cindy, don't be
so angry !" And then, the great great grandma said,.......
Shak Chung Shan Memorial Catholic
Primary School
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LAW YUEN MAN (
6B) Short Story Making-Imaginative Last Sunday morning
when I was still sleeping, suddenly my mother said, 'Mabel! Get up!
Your friend, Joe has addressed you a parcel.' Then I got up and
opened the parcel in a hurry. 'Oh! It is a special pen. It is a
magic wand inside a box.' Then I opened the box and I saw a set of
instruction. I read the instruction very quickly, and then I tried
to play the magic. I waved the magic wand and said 'Turn the cherry
to a strawberry.' Amazing! It turned to a strawberry, it was
incredible. I felt overjoyed and excited. It was because I could
change anything I want with this magic wand. My mother said, 'Don't
use this, this is just for a game, you can't do anything with it.'
But I didn't listen to her. After a few days, when I had my exam, I
felt very scary because I haven't taken any revision and I just used
the magic wand to do the homework. I felt regret and cried for
hours. Suddenly, I felt someone was shaking my hands and woke me up.
Then, I found that it was just a dream only!
Shak Chung Shan Memorial Catholic Primary
School
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LAW YUEN MAN (
6B) Camping
Last Sunday, my father and my mother
and I went to the Snoopy Island. We went there by bus. Then we took
the MTR. We arrived the Snoopy Island at a quarter to five. We felt
very happy. Then we pitched tents in a hurry, so we felt very tired.
Next morning, we swam at the beach. Then we had lunch. There
were so much food for our lunch, such as, vegetables, fish, meats,
corns and rice. Next, we played games, such as, football,
basketball, table-tennis and tennis. After that, we rested.
In the evening, we cycled at the beach. At the beach, we
picked up some shells, took some photos, played badminton and took a
rest. After we took a rest, we took a barbeque. We had some food for
our dinner, such as, ham, meat, fish, sausages, soup and lamb.
At night, my father and I set up a campfire, listened to
ghost stories, sang some songs and danced. We went home at eleven
o?clock. Next morning, I was very happy and excited. I want to go to
Snoopy Island once again.
Shak Chung Shan
Memorial Catholic Primary School
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MAN CHUN KIT (
6D) Poem (friendship)
Friends , friends , My
comfortable , enjoyable friends. Wish our friendship will not
end !
Friends , friends , My friends like go to the
shopping centres. When they enter, they can buy a lot of
pens to write letters.
Friends , friends , My
comfortable , enjoyable friends. Wish our friendship will not
end !
Friends , friends , My friends like reading books.
They want to be a cook and they will prepare some delicious
food.
Friends , friends, My comfortable , enjoyable
friends. Wish our friendship will not end!
Friends ,
friends , My friends like watching television. They don't
like dictation because it needs to have revision.
Friends , friends, My comfortable , enjoyable friends.
Wish our friendship will not end , Wish our friendship will
not end !!!!!!!
St. Patrick Catholic
Primary School, Po Kong Village Road
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TIU SZE JING (
6A) Magic world (1)
Has spread a fable in a lonely
village: The name calls city of the Bell, heard in South Pole?s
Southwest city, each enter person, as soon as does not return. This
city has not appeared on the map. But, after a boy has been to city
of the Bell, then may safely go home. Do you want to know?
After under villagers' closely examining, the young boy told
the story to the villagers. A lot of children encircled a
great-circle.
Everybody listened to young boy's speaking. He
closed the eye, said: "Half year ago, I and my friends also thought
of city of risk the Bell. By now, I thought daddy's decision was
very strange, my daddy had not listened to this fearful fable! After
two days, I decided to leave my home,embarks "city of the Bell". I
called travel of the journey named farewell hometown. After the
twists and turns layered path, I thought the belly was beating a
drum! When my belly in beat a drum, then I discovered I had already
arrived South Pole?s southwest. When I was thinking of the turkey,
pork... The snowball threw by an old uncle to my forehead.
Shak Chung Shan Memorial Catholic Primary
School
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YEUNG WING (
6A) Prison and School
Mary is a Primary six
student.
She has a hard school life.
At school, Mary
needs to pray for God. In prison, you don?t need to pray.
At school, Mary spends most of her time in a space measuring
one metre square. In prison, you spend most of your time in a
room measuring three metres by two metres.
At school, Mary
shares a toilet with her classmates. In prison, you get a toilet
to yourself.
At school, Mary studies hard and does revision.
In prison, you can watch television and play basketball.
At school, Mary needs to pay for your school uniform. In
prison, you don?t need to buy your clothing.
At school, Mary
needs to bring lots of homework back home. In prison, you don?t
have to take work back home.
At school, Mary is under
pressure because of examinations. In prison, you don?t feel
pressured.
Prison is better than school.
Of course
NO.
At home, Mary?s parents love her. At school, Mary?s
teachers love her.
Shak Chung Shan
Memorial Catholic Primary School
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LEE WAI HUNG (
6D) Last Mid-Autumn Festival, I went to an exhibition
which was about endangered species, such as reptiles and amphibians.
It was held in East Point City (in Hang Hau). The exhibition showed
more than 100 species with 1000 animals, they were classified into 8
categories: Gecko, Common, Lizard, Turtle, Tortoise, Snake,
Amphibians, Insect and Arthropod. "The Big Four" in the exhibition
were Goliath Frog, Veiled Chameleon, Giant Gecko and Aldabra
Tortoise. They were the biggest animals of their kind. Just
above the entrance, there was a big showcase with some lizards that
looked quite horrible. When we walked near the showcase, the staff
would explain to us the information of those animals. I thought this
arrangement was good for the visitors because it could let them know
more about the animals. Among all animals, I liked Veiled
Chameleon most because I could see it changing the colour of their
skin. When it was changing the colour, its eyes always rotated. It
was really scary! I also fed the Aldabra Tortoise and I tried to
touch it. I was excited when I felt its hard shell. I felt
cheerful today because I learnt a lot in this trip.
St. Patrick Catholic Primary School, Po Kong Village
Road
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LEE WAI HUNG (
6D) School Pincic 15th November 2006 was my school
picnic day. Our destination was Butterfly Beach Park at Tuen Mun. We
arrived there by school bus. It took about an hour to get there.
I brought a lot of foods such as cakes, chocolates, candies and
sausages. All these were my favorite food. My class was divided
into six groups. I was the leader of my group, our group members
were Danny, Peter, Anson, Kevin, Vincent and Macro. I played
badminton with Miss Poon, my group members and some other
classmates. Miss Poon played badminton very well but she let us win.
We felt so tired that we took a rest and shared our foods. They were
tasty. Suddenly, it started to rain. And it got heavier and heavier.
We all hid under a pavilion until the rain stopped. Then we
walked around the park. It was really big. There was a big maze with
a 'green wall'. It was about one metre tall. So we decided to play
Hide And Seek. there. At last, we took a walk around the park which
was near the beach. The sea view was so beautiful that I took a lot
of photos. It was a happy day. I hope my parents could bring me
there again.
St. Patrick Catholic Primary
School, Po Kong Village Road
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LEE WAI HUNG (
6D) Book Report Biography of Charles Robert Darvin
If you have never read this book before, you must try to read
it. I am sure you will have a better understanding of this famous
person! Charles Robert Darwin (12 February 1809 to 19 April
1882) was born in Shrewsbury, England. Darwin was a British
naturalist. He loved nature very much, regardless of stones,
insects, etc, he would pick it up and took it home to treasure up.
When he was eight years old, he was very naughty. He felt school
life dry and dull, so that he always played jokes on his classmate.
On 1831, his thought was gradually mature. He had a good chance
to go with H.M.S. Beagle to do an inspection on nature around the
world for five years. He found a lot of samples and information.
After this inspection trip, he used the information to write a
book ― The Origin Of Species. He also wrote The Fertilization of
Orchids, The Variation of Plants and Animals under Domestication,
The Descent of Man and Selection in Relation to Sex, The Expression
of Emotions in Man and Animals, etc.
St.
Patrick Catholic Primary School, Po Kong Village
Road
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CHEUNG MAN SHAN (
6B) The sweetest card in the world
My mother's
birthday was coming soon.My sister had a present for my mother
already.I thought for a long time,"What present I should give to my
mum on her birthday?"I wanted to give her a surprise.
I know
many people will give a birthday card to another.I wanted to buy a
birthday card, but I did not have enough money .So I asked my
father,"Do you know what present mother likes?" "I think mother
will like the present from your heart." answered my father.
"What should I give to mum? Ya!...I had an idea! I will make
a card to her, I think she will like it. "
First,I prepared
some beautiful paper.Then,I fold the paper. Next, I drew my mother's
portrait on the first page. Finally,I wrote some thankful words on
the second page.
On that day,I gave it to my mum. She said,
"Oh!Thank you,Sena.Is it made by yourself?" "Sure!"I yelled. "I
think it is the sweetest card in the world!"said mother.
WELNET School
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HO PO TIN TITY (
6D) The origins of Valentine's Day can be traced to the
days of Claudius 22,the Roman Emperor,who forbade his soldiers from
marrying.This,he belived,would keep his forces strong and loyal.A
priest named Valentine,however,secretly performed wedding ceremonies
against Claudius's orders.He was caught and sentenced to death on 14
February.Nowadays,we commemorate Valentine,the patron saint of
lovers,by sending cards,flowers and chocolate to the people we
love. WELNET School
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PUN TSZ YAN (
6C) Biography : Helen Keller Although Helen Keller was
blind and deaf,she was a famous writer .Do you want to know more
about her? Helen Keller was born on 27 June,1880 in America.Her
father was a Captain.In February 1882,Helen suddenly became very
ill.After that,she became blind and deaf. Luckily,Miss Annie
Sullivan met Helen Keller in 1887.Annie helped Helen talk,read,write
and feel things.Annie made Helen happy and helped her to have a good
life. In 1893,Helen wrote a brief antobiography for a
magazine.In 1904,she finished her course in Rodcliffe College.In
1909,she began to speak more strongly in favour of workers'
rights.In 1968,she died. Helen Keller had a strong mind to study
and solve her problems. She set a good example for us to
follow. WELNET School
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CHAN SUET YING (
6C) Chinese New Year Two days before Chinese New Year,
I went shopping with my mother. We bought many things. For example,
clothes, food and red packets. I helped my mother to clean the
kitchen. It's really a busy day. On Chinese New Year's Eve, I
had dinner with my family in a restaurant. We ate a lot of food,
sushi, crabs, fish, pork and vegetables. I also had a dessert. It
was really delicious! On Chinese New Year's Day, I got up early
in the morning and put on the new clothes. Then, I said some lucky
words to my parent. They gave me 2 red packets! I was very happy.
On the second day of Chinese New Year, I went to the restaurant
with my relatives to have dim-sum in the morning. Then, in the
afternoon, I went to my cousin's home. We played computer games
together. It's really fun! WELNET
School
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LEUNG KA MAN (
6E) Rude Person On 5th November, at about a quarter
past five, my mother and I went down to travel by bus to play table
tennis. Suddenly, a man talked about me, he said,'You see! That girl
is afraid of that dog without wearing a dog-mask!'I didn't say
anything! I was a little bit angry with that man because I didn't
say I was afraid of that dog without mask. Mother knew that I was
angry but she said,' Don't say anything! They are arguing!' 'Who?' I
asked. 'That man who talked about you is complaining the host of
that dog.' 'Why?' I asked. Mother said,' I think it is because that
man parks his car there but it is wrong to stay cars there. So the
security personnel went to remind him. He felt unhappy about that.
Then he saw a dog without a mask so he complained that security
personnel why he didn't warn the host of the dog. Now the two men
are arguing.' I understood what was mother talking about, so I
continuesd to watch what would happen after that. 'Shut your mouth
up' said one of the hosts. 'This is a private place! You should put
a mask on your dog's mouth!' said that man. 'No! This is a public
road, we love letting our dog without a mask, you can't be rude!'
said the other man. 'Mother, they are very rude, why don't they sit
down and discuss together?' I ased. 'Not everyone is very kind, they
are impolite, don't learn from them.' answered mother. I hate
rude people, I hate them arguing in public places. I hope after this
day, they will feel shame about what they did today. They will say
sorry to each other and make friends together! WELNET School
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